Comments on: An Edwardian Approach

An Edwardian Approach

grubi — Mon, 25 Feb 2008 00:53:45 -0800

For the RPM Challenge.

An Edwardian Approach (C Gruber) Maybe I'm living in a fantasy I'm not sure what it is you've meant to me But the pages keep on turning while I'm reading An Edwardian approach will find no meaning Maybe I'm closer than I've ever been I can determine virtue in my sins But the pages keep on turning while I'm reading An Edwardian approach will find no meaning The two of us are simply drifting The trials and truth reveal I'm hoping that my journey onward Will manifest something real Maybe I'm hoping for a paradise I feel reality will not suffice But the pages keep on turning while I'm reading An Edwardian approach will find no meaning The two of us are moving forward And maybe you'll see the sun I've given almost nothing to you But I know you asked for none Maybe I'm just afraid it's all complete I'm steadfast as I bask in my defeat But the pages keep on turning while I'm reading An Edwardian approach will find no meaning © 2008 Ready Demo Music

By: nicolin

nicolin — Mon, 25 Feb 2008 05:25:46 -0800

This makes me feel stupid, on a number of levels. Thank you.

By: uncleozzy

uncleozzy — Mon, 25 Feb 2008 07:55:15 -0800

I really like this. The rhythm, your voice, the space. Especially your voice. Maybe it's just my lousy work headphones playing tricks, but the strings sound a bit out of tune with respect to the guitars. Really nice song, though.

By: micayetoca

micayetoca — Mon, 03 Mar 2008 17:21:16 -0800

yeah, I agree with uncleozzy. Due to my bad memory and your good lyrics, I thought you were "the echarpe perdu guy," now I think if you haven't heard that song, you are going to like it. Great song grubi.

By: anifinder

anifinder — Tue, 04 Mar 2008 18:20:28 -0800

I liked the whole song, I think there's a niche to be filled with this kind of music.
I can kinda hear what others are talking about with the strings, though I do like them.

Great work! Look forward to hearing more!