Comments on: Through the Night and to the Day

Through the Night and to the Day

god particle — Thu, 13 Mar 2008 22:45:10 -0800

My second adventure in electronic music

At first I tried to go for the Ed Banger sound but then went my own way. I can't get the mix right - the lead synth line feels too forceful at parts, but I can't figure out how to tone it down while still keeping its strong presence. Also, it feels crowded at times and I can't figure out how to better space out each part. I'd love suggestions as to how to improve the sound.

By: Karlos the Jackal

Karlos the Jackal — Sun, 16 Mar 2008 01:55:31 -0800

By "lead synth line," do you mean the highest pitched part? Most of this is really cool, but that highest part is killing me -- I mean, it's almost causing physical pain, it's so piercing. I'd maybe try replacing it with a different voice altogether or something. On the other hand, I really like what it morphs into at 2:30 -- that's pretty great.

I also like the break at 2:00 -- that kind of fake guitar sound is cool.

By: !Jim

!Jim — Mon, 24 Mar 2008 15:37:38 -0800

Neato. THe high-pitched part doesn't bother me a bit (though I guess it might fi I was using headphones - still, I'd leave it).