Comments on: Jonathan's Things

Jonathan's Things

Wrick — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 05:36:47 -0800

An early song; back when all I needed was an intriguing title to enable me to create something. Ah yes, the good old days.

By: danb

danb — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 10:52:41 -0800

Nice song! Have you considered adding more to it (maybe backing vocals or harmonica, or even another guitar part), or do you like the stripped-down guy-with-a-guitar thing? I think there's room for more here, if you'd like it.

On the other hand, you might have to redo the guitar part if you added more; when you're playing solo, those little hesitations are great, but with more going on it might sound odd to be less rigidly attached to the meter.

By: dobie

dobie — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 14:04:41 -0800

I agree about the hesitations. It makes it sound conversational, your voice has a Dylan-esque. I mean that in a good way.

By: roombythelake

roombythelake — Sun, 06 Jul 2008 23:20:22 -0800

Lyrics are the first thing I hook into, hearing a song, and yours have me paying attention. Hope you post more.