Comments on: dreamsleepwake

dreamsleepwake

Cat Pie Hurts — Mon, 17 Nov 2008 20:43:28 -0800

The first hopeful thing out after a particularly rough breakup.

Comments regarding levels would be extra appreciated. I'm partially deaf and my studio headphones died, so I had to go it alone with my laptop speakers.

By: Karlos the Jackal

Karlos the Jackal — Mon, 17 Nov 2008 22:36:16 -0800

The levels sound pretty good to me, not knowing what you're going for. Maybe I'd pan some of the central parts a little more?

My favorite parts are the stuttery line that starts around 1:40, and the rattlesnake percussion.

Interesting choice on the fake-out and coda.

By: micayetoca

micayetoca — Tue, 18 Nov 2008 03:45:42 -0800

The levels do sound good and the bass drum sounds particularly good that high. I like the piece.

By: wastelands

wastelands — Tue, 18 Nov 2008 21:56:21 -0800

Sounds great to me. I don't hear any problems with the volume levels of each instrument. It flirts with possibly being too busy starting at the 1:50 mark, but not in any big way. Overall I really dig this song. Sounds kind of like a Nine Inch Nails instrumental, but less dull.