Comments on: F**K you

F**K you

grex — Wed, 12 Jul 2006 12:53:55 -0800

Another by my band Evening, this one is more on the grime side of things. Has some pretty nasty lyrics.

By: grex

grex — Wed, 12 Jul 2006 12:57:49 -0800

That me rapping first (in case anyone cares).The band Is composed of me, my brother and Jordan Dare

By: snsranch

snsranch — Wed, 12 Jul 2006 17:24:44 -0800

Hey, fuck you too! Actually when the music started I didn't think I would be impressed, but your vocals are pretty strong. Do you have a pirate radio station near you? This is definately a candidate for that kind of air-play.

By: grex

grex — Thu, 13 Jul 2006 06:14:08 -0800

I'm glad you like it , unfortunately there's not much pirate radio in Canada.

By: klangklangston

klangklangston — Thu, 13 Jul 2006 07:36:22 -0800

I go the opposite way from snsranch I really liked the beat, but the rapping kinda left me cold in a lot of spots, and I thought the chorus was a little too sophomoric. There were too many hallmarks of amatuer rap: offbeat rhyming, inconsistent meter, the use of cussing as explitive (filler), repetitive use of the same word... You might want to try rerecording the vocals with an ear toward more sparseness, and try to de-emo the chorus.
Again, really great beat.

By: klangklangston

klangklangston — Thu, 13 Jul 2006 07:37:58 -0800

Oh, and getting it down to a solid three-and-a-half or four minutes would probably help too. Since there's no real narrative, you can cut the weaker stuff without having to rewrite everything.

By: grex

grex — Thu, 13 Jul 2006 08:10:23 -0800

Yeah the rapping is kinda all over the place. It's probably due to the fact that none of us are really serious about rapping.

By: nitsuj

nitsuj — Sun, 16 Jul 2006 00:57:42 -0800

i like it.