Comments on: Model Home

Model Home

frenetic — Fri, 24 Apr 2009 18:17:44 -0800

Demo of the first track from a dumbass pop concept album I'm working on.

By: Effigy2000

Effigy2000 — Fri, 24 Apr 2009 18:45:04 -0800

A bit more 'techno-y' than I'm used to from you, frenetic, but that seems to be the point and it's still pretty good. Thanks for sharing! Looking forward to the new album.

By: quadog

quadog — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 00:14:52 -0800

FWIW, I normally don't dig this style of music but I found myself getting into this. Like the attitude on the vocals.

By: Karlos the Jackal

Karlos the Jackal — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 03:16:54 -0800

I like this one a lot. Drums (loop?) is really chanky and nice. The instro stuff after the chorus is surprising and cool. Oh, also surprising is the note you go to on the word "home" -- unusual choice -- I really like that.

By: uncleozzy

uncleozzy — Tue, 28 Apr 2009 08:25:53 -0800

This is super cool, has a good groove, and a nice melody. I really dig it.

And I know it's a demo, but I am going to pick a really (really) small nit: I don't know if you're just flying the chorus in at the end and cutting too close or if it's an over-aggressive gate, but the sharp cutoff after "life" during the outro (at 3:05, for example) is distracting enough that I noticed it the first time through.

By: lovermont

lovermont — Wed, 29 Apr 2009 21:36:45 -0800

When I saw the words "dumbass" and "pop" in the description, this is not at all what I expected to hear. It may be pop, but I don't think it qualifies as dumbass it's much too smart. Nice song.

By: dobie

dobie — Fri, 01 May 2009 14:56:11 -0800

Really well done. Sounds like Beck remixed by Simian Mobile Disco.

By: casarkos

casarkos — Sun, 03 May 2009 18:05:24 -0800

This one is really neat.

However, I burned it to CD to listen in the car, and the bass ended up being pretty heavy, to the point that I couldn't make out the words unless I turned it up really loud (I'm also dealing with road noise, of course), and by then the bass on my eardrums was kind of painful. But maybe that's just my speakers, and I still really like the groove.

By: doctor_negative

doctor_negative — Sat, 09 May 2009 23:38:37 -0800

This is awesome, I love the big bottom sound and the edge on the keyboard cuts through it perfectly.