Waiting for a dream

September 1, 2010 5:01 PM

a nice song. I'm not sure why I wrote this. Please, any comments are okay.

posted by MadRat (2 comments total)

I like the pastoral mood of the guitar and your phrasing with rests creates a wonderful landscape of sounds. I'd lose the drums or put them way way way in the back.
posted by tunewell at 7:44 PM on September 2, 2010

I love the beginning of this, I'd also agree, the drums sort of take it out of dreamland for me where I start sort of focusing on the beat and I prefer the flow.
posted by jessamyn at 9:07 PM on September 2, 2010

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