dreamsleepwake

The first hopeful thing out after a particularly rough breakup.

Comments regarding levels would be extra appreciated. I'm partially deaf and my studio headphones died, so I had to go it alone with my laptop speakers.

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posted by Cat Pie Hurts (3 comments total)

The levels sound pretty good to me, not knowing what you're going for. Maybe I'd pan some of the central parts a little more?

My favorite parts are the stuttery line that starts around 1:40, and the rattlesnake percussion.

Interesting choice on the fake-out and coda.
posted by Karlos the Jackal at 10:36 PM on November 17, 2008

The levels do sound good and the bass drum sounds particularly good that high. I like the piece.
posted by micayetoca at 3:45 AM on November 18, 2008

Sounds great to me. I don't hear any problems with the volume levels of each instrument. It flirts with possibly being too busy starting at the 1:50 mark, but not in any big way. Overall I really dig this song. Sounds kind of like a Nine Inch Nails instrumental, but less dull.
posted by wastelands at 9:56 PM on November 18, 2008