Boy On Holiday

If you like the coathangers you'll like this track. Loud, Angry and Punk.

Lyrics:

See you standing there
you got something to say to me
Boy on Holiday
after my tone

See me looking good
and you wanna get on with me
Take your ball home
You ain't gettin some

Wanna talk to me
You're ignoring my friends
We're not gonna wander off
so you can get me alone

Holiday Boy
Think you got me all figured out
You don't have the range
to wander with my roam

Night is getting hot
and the party is picking up
People start to feeling
on each other's tones

Holiday boy
tries to come up to dance with me
Push the boy away
to get him out of my zone

Pretty Pride Girl
out on the dance floor
Holiday Boy
is getting up on her tone

Her Pretty Pride Pack
keep a jealous eye over her
Holiday Boy
has gotten her all alone

I see it in their eyes
Keeping close watch over her
Can Pretty Pride Girl
handle this on her own?

Pretty Pride Pack and I
lock eyes across the floor
As Holiday Boy
takes her out of their zone

• play
• pause
• min volume
• max volume

posted by nikaspark (4 comments total)

ehhh... trying to sort out what's up with the volume of this track...Seems low when I playback mixes any other system other than my DAW system.
posted by nikaspark at 3:59 PM on July 15, 2018

I love this, it's great!

Much less seriously: I've never actually heard a coathanger ... I assume it would sound like a lo-fi triangle? ;-)
posted by the quidnunc kid at 9:23 AM on July 17, 2018 [1 favorite]

I'd be happy to take a crack at maximizing it. Do you have the bass isolated? Seems like this could use a low end punch, but the vox and guits are heavenly in their high-end buzz.
posted by es_de_bah at 12:19 AM on July 22, 2018

Yeah this is ace!

I agree that the bass/drums could perhaps use a little boost, and a bit more high end on the snare if possible? But it's kind of nice and raw as it is.
posted by greenish at 4:17 AM on July 26, 2018