Jonathan's Things

July 5, 2008 5:36 AM

An early song; back when all I needed was an intriguing title to enable me to create something. Ah yes, the good old days.

posted by Wrick (3 comments total)

Nice song! Have you considered adding more to it (maybe backing vocals or harmonica, or even another guitar part), or do you like the stripped-down guy-with-a-guitar thing? I think there's room for more here, if you'd like it.

On the other hand, you might have to redo the guitar part if you added more; when you're playing solo, those little hesitations are great, but with more going on it might sound odd to be less rigidly attached to the meter.
posted by danb at 10:52 AM on July 5, 2008

I agree about the hesitations. It makes it sound conversational, your voice has a Dylan-esque. I mean that in a good way.
posted by dobie at 2:04 PM on July 5, 2008

Lyrics are the first thing I hook into, hearing a song, and yours have me paying attention. Hope you post more.
posted by roombythelake at 11:20 PM on July 6, 2008

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