vampire deer - st wannabe

May 3, 2013 2:06 PM

song 03 - it's difficult when people seem to be so much cooler and together than you

oh, saint wannabe, look at those you think are free
do you want to be them? - they're so far above you
with their mysteries, their knowing tales and glances
they're a random symphony, so hard to listen to
wish upon a daylight star or call out to the moon
or try hard to explain it, but they're not hearing you
and it's face to face to nightime talk, weaving all the whispers
but when it comes to morning, it's just another day
more and more these days i'm just silent by myself

no one knows the ghost you lost, they can't reach you
does it really matter? - no, you can't make up your mind
play the fool and play it well while limbo keeps you numb
don't you dare reveal it - how hard it is to live
songs that cut the stories short while your voice betrays you
it's like a broken radio that few will listen to
just want another song, just want another night
with someone - just want to feel something again
more and more these days i'm just silent by myself

posted by pyramid termite (2 comments total) 1 user marked this as a favorite

Your music has some interesting textures to it, a nice balance of electronic and acoustic instruments. I like the chilled, mellow vibe. The tune isn't bad either. The vocals are mixed a little low and I'd also say that you could possibly have used another take or two. Your voice isn't bad and it fits the music quite nicely, it's just your pitch tends to slide around a lot.
posted by drmadrigal at 5:42 PM on May 4, 2013

drmadrigal, I agree with you down to the words you used to explain your thoughts.
posted by AnTilgangs at 5:33 PM on May 5, 2013

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