Working title: Mutual mix down

August 1, 2013 2:44 PM

It was a choice between uploading nothing and this half finished song...

Would love some feedback on where to take this, or indeed, if it is worth taking anywhere. Apologies for the poor production value, bad lyrics, and generally amateur-hour vibe... (Actually would to know how to finish anything when it comes to song writing!)

posted by piyushnz (1 comment total)

I think you need to re-sing this with a bit more faith in it - you sound a bit unsure and when you hit your stride it's really lovely.

Also give it some welly in the high notes, you can definitely hit them by the sound of it and if to do that you have to sing either a bit softer or louder to make it work, then do that, adjusting your distance from the mic accordingly to compensate for the volume change. A bit of compression on the vocal afterwards will help too.
posted by greenish at 5:44 AM on August 2, 2013


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