February 1, 2016 1:02 PM

another short-form pop demo w/vox.... struggling to get the lyrics, 2nd verse and overall phrasing ironed out, so wanted to crank out the demo at least so I can move onto something else for a while.

posted by CarrotAdventure (5 comments total) 1 user marked this as a favorite

I love the feel, it's a great driving introspective pop vibe. Really good balance of voice and instruments, and a strong arrangement.
posted by BlackPebble at 1:32 PM on February 1, 2016

Great dirty crunchy guitar sound at the beginning, I can't put my finger on why I love it so much, it's like clean and distorted at the same time.
posted by grog at 1:55 PM on February 1, 2016

Love it. Nostalgia wrapped up in beautiful silky pop. If you would like us to comment on the lyrics though it would be nice to see them as well :)
posted by AnTilgangs at 3:12 AM on February 2, 2016

I would really love to mess about with remixing this. Not that I'm very good at it but there's some fun stuff going on.
posted by feckless fecal fear mongering at 10:25 AM on February 9, 2016 [1 favorite]

feckless - I'd be happy to send you the instrumental stems if you want! I've unfortunately deleted the vocal stems already as it's just a draft and I keep all the vocal takes on my desktop until the draft is done, at which point I delete them. But let me know if you want the gtr/bass/drum parts!
posted by CarrotAdventure at 10:12 PM on February 9, 2016

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