waveplay

April 7, 2017 8:34 PM

written in january while staring at the banks of the mighty lake ontario

posted by fingers_of_fire (2 comments total)

I love the melody in this, and the guitar part is such a nice steady backing to it.

Something I found a little distracting was that the guitar has been recorded/engineered to be quite low-key, whereas your voice is mixed quite high, with your singing quite hard. I feel like it might be interesting to try it with a very slightly softer, breathier approach. But that's just my personal opinion and I think there'll be people here who disagree and think that would spoil it :)
posted by greenish at 9:03 AM on April 10


with your singing quite hard. I feel like it might be interesting to try it with a very slightly softer, breathier approach.
I wouldn't have thought that until greenish said it. Now, being naturally contrary, I can't help wondering what your vocals would sound like over a much more rock arrangement. Pearl Jam it up! (Or not, according to taste!)
posted by comealongpole at 4:09 PM on April 12


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