The Silk Road

September 26, 2007 9:14 AM

Something a friend and I made awhile ago

A friend and I made this about a year ago. Since then we've stopped making music, but we'd like to start up again, so I figured I'd post this and get some feedback and criticism so we have a better of idea what to do.

posted by god particle (2 comments total)

I keep waiting for it to really kick in. The guitar is peppy and upbeat, but the lyrics are subdued: I wanted them to jump up an octave or so, have a fancy pantsy bridge, a different chorus or verse.
posted by rhapsodie at 8:31 PM on September 26, 2007

I agree with rhapsodie, but are you looking to enhance this song or find ways to be motivated to play more?
posted by snsranch at 4:28 PM on September 28, 2007

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