April 28, 2009 8:20 PM

A song mostly written on a Friday.

Like everything else I write. It's really repetitive and puts you into a whole different type of atmosphere. I'm considering maybe making it shorter or adding more.

What do you think, hive mind?

posted by azarbayejani (3 comments total) 1 user marked this as a favorite

I think it goes really well with the chilly wind that is blowing tonight. I don't think it needs to be shorter, though, it doesn't get boring and it does go through different variations. If it's a matter of voting, I vote for leaving it as it is.
posted by micayetoca at 5:37 PM on April 29, 2009

It is long, but I think it develops at a nice pace.

In fact, just as I was thinking that I'd like that main 6-note riff to go away for awhile -- there it went.

And it doesn't come back in that same voice, which I expected, but in a much subtler one -- bold move.
posted by Karlos the Jackal at 4:29 AM on April 30, 2009

Thanks for listening, guys! I guess I'll just leave it the same if you two think it's good.

I never expected anything I've written to be described as bold!
posted by azarbayejani at 12:32 PM on May 1, 2009

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