Blue Sketch #1

January 11, 2011 2:29 PM

A demo of a composition of my own I'm working on. If you've got ideas on direction or structure or whatever, comments are welcome.

Also: I clearly need to tune my piano. Oy.

posted by koeselitz (2 comments total) 2 users marked this as a favorite

Are the the first 40 seconds or so part of the song? If so, I think they are way too noodlely.
The main melody is pretty nice though. One you get it down with a more solid rhythm and feel you'll have a good tune.
posted by zephyr_words at 11:43 PM on January 12, 2011

Meh on Zephyr -- this was great :)
posted by Ogre Lawless at 8:54 AM on January 16, 2019

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