The Siren
August 12, 2012 2:34 PM
Probably the hardest song off the latest Red On Strike album, the Siren calls the nation to rock! Previously.
This was my attempt to write a song about going out to get laid. First time I showed our singer Red the lyrics she said "that's cheesy, like a Spinal Tap song." Not a bad thing, but not quite the response I was looking for.
I like the riff though, and the cheesy lyrics kind of fit it so they stayed. I feel like it needs something - not the guitar line in the previous version, but something to break it up some.
This was my attempt to write a song about going out to get laid. First time I showed our singer Red the lyrics she said "that's cheesy, like a Spinal Tap song." Not a bad thing, but not quite the response I was looking for.
I like the riff though, and the cheesy lyrics kind of fit it so they stayed. I feel like it needs something - not the guitar line in the previous version, but something to break it up some.
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posted by Ardiril at 10:44 PM on August 14, 2012 [1 favorite]