Castles

An electronic take on Pablo Casals playing Prelude in G.

I've been working on the skeleton of this track for a week-ish, but I decided to attempt just putting it all together in one go, and I think it went pretty well. Maybe it goes on too long? Any suggestions?

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posted by azarbayejani (1 comment total)

The introduction doesn't have enough variation to hold interest. When the kicks come in, I felt a bit jostled... I think a different downbeat is suggested by what came before. I like the general atmosphere of it, but I think it needs to give a greater sense of development, of progression.
posted by phrontist at 5:04 AM on August 14