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I wrote the music for this last summer, and I eventually intend to re-record it with lyrics once I finish them but for now I'm putting it up here as an instrumental and looking for feedback from the MeFi community.

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posted by MattMangels (1 comment total)

I like this, but for me it needs a lot more contrast. Until the little keys part comes in at the end it's like, ALL synth, and could do with either some electronic shimmers or some nice acoustic instrument/s, to hold one's interest.

I mean, unless all synths is your sound, in which case I'd say you're just gonna need a really good vocal and you're done.
posted by greenish at 3:44 AM on February 19