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Flowing, dark piano and atmospheric synth. TBH I've been tinkering with this for so long that I'm not sure if I like it anymore. (It's like the "if you a repeat a word enough times it doesn't even sound like a word" effect--I don't hear what I once heard in it.) But I really liked the piano part when I first came up with it. What do you think?

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posted by Bluebird Wine (3 comments total)

I like this. I think I hear what you're hearing, and honestly I think it's super close to being a fantastic track. If there's any room for improvement, it's that it could use a little more imperfection. Get uneven on the key pressure, bend the timing a bit, roughen it up. Check out this track by Balmorhea for inspiration.
posted by TheNegativeInfluence at 12:13 AM on May 29, 2018

It's really nice!
posted by the quidnunc kid at 7:27 AM on May 30, 2018

Oh this is good. I am sad today and it got me there. Even on a happy day I'd be in love with this. Have you lyrics for it?
posted by billiebee at 9:45 AM on June 20, 2018