Let's try that again

This is a complete reworking of a song I posted before (17) which is now...prettier? Mellower? Flows more? What do you think of my new direction?

I've been working on figuring out what can be done with GarageBand and trying to improve recording quality, so if you have anything constructive to say about that I would really appreciate it too!

• play
• pause
• min volume
• max volume

posted by Bluebird Wine (1 comment total)

It's so hard to compare these two versions, they really have different feelings. They both have qualities that could come together so nicely. For example, the two piano parts are so different in each recording, but I'm imagining a version that somehow brings them together, or has one come in and out. I also enjoyed the harmonies and viola, and generally higher/more hopeful of the original. Your voice sounds great in both.
posted by Corduroy at 3:57 AM on March 28, 2018